I mean make it however you want. Even though I really did blush and I can't remember ever blushing through something I've read lol!

So here's my suggestion... I might write a mini-response... but I'll let you finish your post and then I'll have a follow up, like you said, of Kofo's reaction... but I don't think you should delete your posts because I imagine we'll have two different styles which will reflect how our characters view sex with each other maybe differently.

While it may be one way for Kleo, it might be something else for Kofo. That would another interesting contrast in the two of them. What they value about their intimacy together.

If I can write with my eyes closed... maybe I won't blush while replying. lol

But get back to me as soon as you can... cuz it seems like the forum is stuck.

Sounds great to me, and the more I thought about it the more I like the idea. I sort of wanted to know how she was feeling and going into this from the start. What was she thinking before entering, what was her reaction to the little strip tease, was she already in le buff, or will she still be clothed so Kleo has to peel her into nakedness. So go for the post and see where it takes you. I will try to start to craft the rest of what I think may happen. So do you think we will still blow 1073's mind

Her neck would be a stump if she read this lol!

From the bottom of my heart. I am sooo sooo sooo sorry I didn't post today. They kept bombarding me in Griffin and Phoenix. I'm worn out from camp and I have to get up at 7 tomorrow morning because it takes me forever to get dressed in the morning and I have a thing about being early for work (I'm late for everything else... and I mean everything else).

Anyway I did not mean for this to be my last priority because I was looking forward to trying to figure this whole thing out, today. But I just can't do it and stay awake tomorrow. I wish I could get on AIM express but it's a summer camp so we're usually outside.

Anyway... I think you're awesome KO. I'll try to do this first thing when I get home tomorrow.

Hugs and things.

Don't worry about it at all. I can read that they have been rather demanding in Griffin, but it seems to be worth it. The story is awesom, but I think its movin a bit too fast for me to jump in right now. We've been searching for a house and finally got the contract on the one we wanted to go through today. So I'm going to be busy with inspections, and settlement, and actually moving for the next few months.

Anyway, don't worry about being slow here, everyone else it, so I don't mind taking our time on this. Course that is if we are still going to do this at all. I mean I dont' know where Ke'ak went, but he and the others seem to have forgotten this little place. Which is okay, I missed the Dark Path a lot and am glad we are starting to write there again.

Well, good luck with work and really don't kill yourself to post something here if you need to focus on Griffin. I think that should be the priority since it rocks.

Don't worry, I'm still around. Someone's got to keep this site running. I'm back up to status. (And now I'm starting to sound like some weird kind of cyborg for some reason...)

Well I posted and you can see how far I went along with our outline. I think I'd like to stop it there, I kinda think that is a good place if that is cool with you. I don't mind going further, but I think it may end up being to much, and we should leave our audience wanting more

So if your good with it I was thinking now they could actually shower, or perhaps just hit the sack? I'm not sure what in game time it is exactly but I imagine it to be pretty early morning. So I'm not sure if Kofo was planning on spending the night or if they will have to split up.

Kleo I think will be getting a phone call from Shu Li and directions on where to go next. I have no idea where that will be, but was hoping someone would have an idea. Maybe Kofo?

I would be cool if they went out together to kick ass and take names looking for the kid. I was planning on have Kleo dress up a la Kate Beckinsale from Underworld, except with knives instead of guns. Thought that may be a fun look for her.

Anyway, let me konw what you think and want to do. Mayeb the two can talk about it as soon as we figure it out while they are getting in their PJs or showering or whatever.

Sheesh have you ever written a romance novel?


Well either they could go to sleep together and in the middle of the night Kleo get a call and leave Kofo... but then Kofo would wake up with the sadface becaues she just used her up like a little tube of toothpaste

If you want Kofo to come along with Kleo on her travels she will if she just asks her, though. Kofo's got nothing better to do than to curse out Mos.